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Let me know if there are any other issues. Pass/Fail: Cognissonance ( talk) 16:04, 19 October 2016 (UTC) Reply
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"The update also added more statistics such a player's total survival time across all runs" Fix grammar and flow: "The update also added more statistics, such as a player's total survival time across all runs"."supplement the jumping mechanism the player can be propelled further and perform a double jump by firing downwards while jumping" - Minimize use of "while jumping": "supplement the jumping mechanism the player can be propelled further and perform a double jump by firing downwards while still in the air"."The shogun blast" - Fix grammar and consistency: "The shotgun-like blast".It's not referring to the jump movement speed but simply the player's base movement. Clarify: "The player character can jump with high-speed movement to perform evasive maneouvers". "The player character can jump and movement speed is high to perform evasive maneouvers" reads like "movement speed" is a verb."This, alongside the enemies' aggressive behaviour encourages" - Put a comma after " behaviour"."Accessed via the leaderboards" - Are there several leaderboards or only one?."survival time is published on global leaderboard" - Fix grammar: "survival time is published on a global leaderboard".In the same vein, "begin to appear" may be changed to " appear".
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"a series of tentacled towering creatures spawn and begin to release" - Put a comma after " tentacled" and replace "begin to release" with " start releasing", to minimize repetition of the word "begin"."transported to a flat floating platform arena" - Put a comma after " flat"."The goal of the game is kill demonic enemies" - Fix grammar: "The goal of the game is to kill demonic enemies".Remove repetition of player character link."The player character is looking at set of approaching enemies" - Fix grammar: "The player character is looking at a set of approaching enemies".Y Rewrote the part in development and release instead. Rewrite so that it's at the very least a little different.
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contribs) 13:45, 19 October 2016 (UTC) Reply Īfter Metal Gear Rising: Revengeance, this will be a breath of fresh air.The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:Devil Daggers/GA1.